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Echos of the Past 
19th-Feb-2009 07:56 pm
Just a drabble that came to me while reading "Dollhouse" reviews. I am not Joss Whedon, so I do not own any of the characters here in.




It hadn't been easy, not even for a man like he had used to be, an Operative who knew where to look, but he had done it. Had found the trail of programs and experiments that traced back from River Tam.

He sorted through them all, looking for the one that could have been said to be the first – the one from which all others built on.

And he found it.

Before the physical conditioning programs that brought forth pure brute power super-soldiers.
Before the mental conditioning programs that brought forth human computers and semi-psychics.
Even before the exodus from Earth-that-was.

The word reverberated in the air of his room even as the blade of his katana pierced his heart, “Dollhouse.”
Meatloaf
Comments 
20th-Feb-2009 01:12 am (UTC)
Ooooh, lovely idea there! Suitably bleak and spare to match the Operative. Awesome :)
20th-Feb-2009 04:45 am (UTC)
You are a genius.

*shivers*

God, thinking about the Dollhouse freaks me out.
20th-Feb-2009 05:00 am (UTC)
The girl sleeps in a box! And is trained to be the perfect tool! What else was I suppose to think?

Also, you made me blush.
20th-Feb-2009 04:46 pm (UTC)
Oh, wow... That's amazing. I never would have thought to bridge the two like that. Great work!
20th-Feb-2009 06:12 pm (UTC)
And it's all your fault ;P
23rd-Feb-2009 01:19 pm (UTC)
Such a neat idea! It sent shivers down me.
25th-Feb-2009 06:11 am (UTC)
Thank you.
21st-Jul-2009 05:36 pm (UTC)
I read this before Remix, and found it just as chilling then. I haven't seen Dollhouse and won't, but I still like what you achieved here.
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